First semester portfolio- favorite piece

My favorite piece I have written this year would probably have to be the one about my dad and his accident that he had. Here is the gist of the whole thing my dad was working in his bucket truck (he is an electrician) and it was icy outside. He reached down for a tool and he fell out of his bucket on to his truck. He just thought he had knocked the wind out of him, but he didn’t. He broke 3 ribs punctured a lung and had internal bleeding (he had to get 12 blood transplants). How I thought of writing about this is when my teacher Mrs. M asked if we had any accident or if our family members have, so I thought of this. The genre of the story is a long story. It’s my favorite story because it took me a long time to write and I put a lot of effort into writing it (it was 5 pages long).