White Collar

White Collar is a relatively new TV show on USA. I was just flipping through channels and I started watching this. The main character is a criminal named Neil. He went to jail for stealing. he has major girlfriend problems, and now he works for the guy who caught him when he escaped jail. They salve crimes and he works undercover. White Collar kind of reminds me of allot of movies, it has plenty of things that make you think a little bit, and allot of criminals in it.
I like white color because I think it is funny. I enjoy watching Neil outsmart everyone else. Another reason I like it is because Neil is really trying to find his x-girlfriend who is trying to run from him because the cops told her to. Neil would do anything to get her back. I would recommend White collar to anyone who wants to laugh a bit, be amazed by someone smartness, and have a great time watching it. That’s why I blogged about White Collor.

First semester portfolio- reflection

First semester
First semester I learned a lot I didn’t know before. Like For instance in English I learned what an awwubis is. I still don’t know exactly what they are but I’m working on it. Also, I learned how to make good sentences instead of boring ones. Next, we learned to shut up in class, as we I’m speaking for the whole class.What I learned for myself is that it is really hard to catch up when you have been gone for several days. Next, I learned that school is allot easier if you’re not on the teachers bad side, and maybe I shouldn’t play games in SRB (student responsibility) if I don’t have everything done.The most important thing that will help me the most is that you have a lot of years of school ahead of you. So u might as well start liking school because otherwise it’s going to be horrible. Drew

First semester porfolio- piece i would like to revise

The piece I would like to revise, would probably be the piece on how I fell off of the giant stone jackrabbit. I thought of this story when she said if we had any injuries that we wanted to write about. So I thought which one I should write about (I have allot of them by the way). So I picked it, and I just wrote the concept of the whole story. But I would like to change it a little bit so it makes more sense, and tells a little more about what happened, and add some things like an awwubis to make it sound better. That’s why I would like to change it because I think it could be way better than it already is. The genre of the story is a short story.drew

First semester portfolio- favorite piece

My favorite piece I have written this year would probably have to be the one about my dad and his accident that he had. Here is the gist of the whole thing my dad was working in his bucket truck (he is an electrician) and it was icy outside. He reached down for a tool and he fell out of his bucket on to his truck. He just thought he had knocked the wind out of him, but he didn’t. He broke 3 ribs punctured a lung and had internal bleeding (he had to get 12 blood transplants). How I thought of writing about this is when my teacher Mrs. M asked if we had any accident or if our family members have, so I thought of this. The genre of the story is a long story. It’s my favorite story because it took me a long time to write and I put a lot of effort into writing it (it was 5 pages long).